Reverie
1 min readOct 18, 2021

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Three things:

1. I don't think this story is real

2. If it is real, you're an immoral person too. Not to the extent of your husband but you're sensationalising and trying to make money off something that is ruining multiple people's lives.

3. This particular instalment of the story isn't written as well as your other instalments. I am very confused as to what exactly is happening. The fact there are a dozen links to other stories also make it less readable. I think the fact you refer to multiple people as "the blonde" makes it hard to follow. We get it, every woman in this story is blonde. Plus Brian. Who are the "six platinum heads"? What was the 60 second debrief from the car to the Chipotle door? What was said? You say it made you think your husband was making you a partner, but we don't even know what he said. And what was the "us too" in reference to? What was the "chorus to a song you've never heard"? And why is the facade of a happy family so important to getting $26 million? It's so confusing.

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Reverie
Reverie

Written by Reverie

“The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds” — Cloud Atlas

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